Posts Tagged ‘dirt’

Is this a good start to my story?

Thursday, February 3rd, 2011

**Prologue** His hair matched the black of his shirt and his eyes were cold emeralds. The box was halfway obscured by dirt before the man, Nikolai Krevok, fully grasped the idea that his son was in there. His sobs were horrible, broken sounds punctuated by gasps. The sight of him weeping, his face a mask [...]

What do you think of this character sketch?

Saturday, January 8th, 2011

As she walked through the barn doors, the horses nickered an affectionate welcome. Her tall thin frame floated gracefully along the stalls. She had a slight arrogance in the way that she walked, but it was carefully hidden behind her shy disposition. She knew she was good at what she did, but too modest to [...]

this is a must read!!!!! absolutly AWEFULLLLLLL?

Thursday, September 2nd, 2010

This is just the worst!!! Please keep in mind my house is very clean (so of course this sorta thing would just have to happen to me!!!) I was vacuming rugs in my mud room where our garbadge is my daughter was playing with onions from the pantry. The phone rang it was my sis. [...]